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 All applicable copyrights and credits can be found in the applicable
 file sources found in the files src.tar.gz and srcsys.tar.gz.
 <p>
-Following this are the instructions if you had purchased a CDROM set
+Following this are the instructions which you would have on a piece of
+paper if you had purchased a CDROM set
 from <a href=orders.html>http://www.OpenBSD.org/orders.html</a>,
-instead of attempting to do
-an alternate form of install.  The instructions for doing an ftp (or
-other style of) install are very similar; the CDROM instructions are
-left intact so that you can see how much easier it would have been if
-you had purchased a CDROM instead.
+instead of doing an an alternate form of install.  The instructions for
+doing an ftp (or other style of) install are very similar; the CDROM
+instructions are left intact so that you can see how much easier it
+would have been if you had purchased a CDROM instead.
 <p>
 <hr>
 Please refer to the following files on the two CDROM's for extensive