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If you want to try to get a bookstore local to you to carry it,
have them order
ISBN 0-9683637-2-5.
-
Certainly, the OpenBSD ports system is not complete. This is because -the full integration of ports into the OpenBSD environment is a very +the full integration of ports into the OpenBSD environment is still a young project as of this release. We believe the ports that are provided here are stable, but it is most important to realize that ports will continue to grow a great deal in functionality in the @@ -194,8 +194,8 @@ As we said, ports will be growing a lot in the future. The ports/ directory represents a CVS (see the manpage for cvs(1) if you aren't familiar with CVS) checkout of our ports. As with our complete source -tree, we will soon be making ports available via anoncvs. So, in -order to keep current with the, you must make the ports/ tree +tree, our ports tree is available via anoncvs. So, in +order to keep current with it, you must make the ports/ tree available on a read-write medium and update the tree with a command like:
@@ -207,8 +207,8 @@ with the location of your ports collection and a nearby anoncvs server.]
-Again, it's important to see the webpage for specific instructions as -this is a very new service which hasn't yet been ironed out +Again, it is important to see the webpage for specific instructions as +this is a new service which hasn't yet been ironed out completely.
Finally, despite ports' youth, help is never far. If you're