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retrieving revision 1.65
retrieving revision 1.66
diff -u -r1.65 -r1.66
--- www/52.html	2012/11/01 14:19:01	1.65
+++ www/52.html	2012/11/03 19:17:17	1.66
@@ -161,11 +161,11 @@
          now allows SA lifetimes to be specified in its
          <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ipsec.conf&amp;sektion=5">ipsec.conf(5)</a>
          file.
-    <li>Rewrote <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=tftpd&amp;sektion=8">tftpd(8)</a> as a persistent, non-blocking daemon.
+    <li><a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=tftpd&amp;sektion=8">tftpd(8)</a> rewritten as a persistent, non-blocking daemon.
     <li><a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=tftp&amp;sektion=1">tftp(1)</a> client now supports IPv6.
     <li><a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=snmpd&amp;sektion=8">snmpd(8)</a> now supports PF-MIB, UCD-DISKIO-MIB, and
 	additional OIDs in HOST-RESOURCES-MIB.
-    <li><a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bgpd&amp;sektion=8">bgpd(8)</a> is now more robust to network instability.
+    <li><a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bgpd&amp;sektion=8">bgpd(8)</a> is now more robust when encountering network instability.
     <li>Adjust the <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bgpd&amp;sektion=8">bgpd(8)</a> route decision code to cover checks needed due to route reflection.
     <li>Various fixes to improve error reporting in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bgpd&amp;sektion=8">bgpd(8)</a> including support of RFC 6608.
     <li>For debugging purposes <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bgpctl&amp;sektion=8">bgpctl(8)</a> can load MRT dumps into <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=bgpd&amp;sektion=8">bgpd(8)</a>.
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
     <li><a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pf&amp;sektion=4">pf(4)</a> now supports weighted least-states load balancing.
     <li>The prio and tos options are now part of the "set { }" block.
         See <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pf.conf&amp;sektion=5">pf.conf(5)</a>.
-    <li>Allow to set the tos on IPv6 packets.
+    <li>Allow setting the tos on IPv6 packets.
     <li>Better demotion handling in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pfsync&amp;sektion=4">pfsync(4)</a> to prevent failovers without having a full state table.
     <li>Fixed printing of wildcard anchors in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pfctl&amp;sektion=8">pfctl(8)</a>.
     </ul>
@@ -328,7 +328,7 @@
 the package build process:
     <ul>
     <li>dpb got simpler and faster. Handles distfiles, works without any
-    option.
+    options.
     <li>Simpler and less error-prone mechanisms for handling MD differences.
     <li>dpb is now used for mirroring distfiles, to the great joy of
     <a href="ftp://ftp.openbsd.org/pub/OpenBSD/distfiles/">ftp://ftp.openbsd.org/pub/OpenBSD/distfiles/</a>
@@ -389,7 +389,7 @@
     <li>Xenocara (based on X.Org 7.7 with xserver 1.12.2 + patches,
       freetype 2.4.10, fontconfig 2.8.0, Mesa 7.10.3, xterm 279,
       xkeyboard-config 2.6 and more)
-    <li>Gcc 4.2.1 (+patches) and 2.95.3 (+ patches)
+    <li>Gcc 4.2.1 (+ patches) and 2.95.3 (+ patches)
     <li>Perl 5.12.2 (+ patches)
     <li>Our improved and secured version of Apache 1.3, with
       SSL/TLS and DSO support
@@ -808,7 +808,7 @@
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