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@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@
     <ul>
     <li>ACPI support on OpenBSD/arm64 platforms.
     <li>The <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/radeondrm.4">radeondrm(4)</a>
-        driver was updated to code based on Linux 4.4.155 adding modesetting
+        driver was updated to code based on Linux 4.4.155, adding modesetting
         support for KAVERI/KABINI/MULLINS APUs and
         OLAND/BONAIRE/HAINAN/HAWAII GPUs.
     <li>Support for
@@ -134,7 +134,7 @@
        <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/mfii.4">mfii(4)</a>.
     <li>On i386 Intel CPU microcode is loaded on boot.
     <li>On sparc64 <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/ldomctl.8">ldomctl(8)</a>
-       now supports more modern firmwares found on SPARC T2+ and T3 machines in
+       now supports more modern firmware found on SPARC T2+ and T3 machines in
        particular such as T1000, T5120 and T5240.
        NVRAM variables can now be set per logical domain.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/com.4">com(4)</a>
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@
     <li>New <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/islrtc.4">islrtc</a>
        driver for Intersil ISL1208 Real Time Clock.
     <li>Support for the Huawei k3772 in
-       <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/umsm.4">umsm</a>.
+       <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/umsm.4">umsm(4)</a>.
     <li>Support for the VIA VX900 chipset in
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/viapm.4">viapm(4)</a>.
     <li>Support for GNSS networks other than GPS in
@@ -186,10 +186,10 @@
 <li>Generic network stack improvements:
     <ul>
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/trunk.4">trunk(4)</a>
-       now has LACP administrative knobs for: mode, timeout, system priority,
+       now has LACP administrative knobs for mode, timeout, system priority,
        port priority, and ifq priority.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/ifconfig.8">ifconfig(8)</a>
-       now has the ability to adjust LACP administrative knobs:
+       now has the ability to adjust LACP administrative knobs
        <code>lacpmode</code> and <code>lacptimeout</code>.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/sendmsg.2">sendmsg(2)</a>,
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/sendto.2">sendto(2)</a>,
@@ -208,11 +208,11 @@
     <ul>
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/installurl.5">installurl(5)</a> now
         defaults to
-        <a href="https://cdn.openbsd.org/pub/OpenBSD">cdn.openbsd.org</a> if it
-        does not exist and no official mirror was used to get working
+        <a href="ftp.html">cdn.openbsd.org</a> if
+        no mirror was chosen during installation.
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/pkg_add.1">pkg_add(1)</a> and
-        <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/syspatch.8">syspatch(8)</a> experience
-        out of the box.
+        <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/syspatch.8">syspatch(8)</a>
+        will thus work out of the box.
     <li>DUID can be used to answer the "Which disk is the root disk?"
         question during upgrade.
     <li>Installing a
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@
         use per-function random cookies to protect access to function
         return instructions, making them harder to use in ROP gadgets.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/clang-local.1">clang(1)</a>
-        includes a pass which identifies common instructions which
+        includes a pass that identifies common instructions which
         may be useful in ROP gadgets and replaces them with safe
         alternatives on amd64 and i386.
     <li>The Retpoline mitigation against Spectre Variant 2 has been
@@ -247,9 +247,9 @@
     <li>Meltdown mitigation was added to i386.
     <li>amd64 now uses eager-FPU switching to prevent FPU state
         information speculatively leaking across protection boundaries.
-    <li>Because Simultaneous multithreading (SMT) uses core resources in
-        a shared and unsafe manner, it is now disabled by default
-        and can be enabled with the new <code>hw.smt</code>
+    <li>Because Simultaneous MultiThreading (SMT) uses core resources in
+        a shared and unsafe manner, it is now disabled by default.
+        It and can be enabled with the new <code>hw.smt</code>
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/sysctl.2">sysctl(2)</a> variable.
     <li>Audio recording is now disabled by default and can be enabled
         with the new <code>kern.audio.record</code>
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/getpwnam.3">getpwuid(3)</a> no
 	longer return a pointer to static storage but a managed allocation
 	which gets unmapped.  This allows detection of access to stale entries.
-    <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/sshd.8">sshd</a> includes
+    <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/sshd.8">sshd(8)</a> includes
         improved defence against user enumeration attacks.
     </ul>
 <p>
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
         bound into an alternate routing domain.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/ospf6d.8">ospf6d(8)</a> is
         now pledged.
-    <li>Prevent ospfd(8) and ospf6d(8) to be started more than once
+    <li>Prevent ospfd(8) and ospf6d(8) from being started more than once
         (in the same routing domain).
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/slaacd.8">slaacd(8)</a> is now fully
         pledged.
@@ -279,9 +279,9 @@
         the kernel when Duplicate Address Detection (DAD) fails and generates
         different addresses when possible.
     <li>When <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/slaacd.8">slaacd(8)</a> detects
-        roaming between networks it deprecates all configured IPs. IPs from
+        roaming between networks, it deprecates all configured IPs. IPs from
         newly advertised prefixes will be preferred.
-    <li>A new daemon, <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/rad.8">rad(8)</a> sends
+    <li>A new daemon, <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/rad.8">rad(8)</a>, sends
         IPv6 Router Advertisement messages and replaces the old rtadvd(8)
         daemon from KAME.
     <li>The anachronistic
@@ -302,9 +302,9 @@
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dhclient.leases.5">dhclient.leases(5)</a>,
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/resolv.conf.5">resolv.conf(5)</a>,
         and any '-L'
-	file before going daemon and returning control
+	file before daemonizing and returning control
 	to invoking scripts.
-    <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dhclient.8">dhclient(8)</a>
+    <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dhclient.8">dhclient(8)</a>'s
         '-i' option now discards any previously defined values for the options
         to be ignored.
     <li>Any change to any interface now causes
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@
         now always records the client identifier used to obtain a lease,
         enabling better conformance to RFC 6842.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dhclient.8">dhclient(8)</a>
-        now has the option '-r' to release the current lease and exit.
+        now has the '-r' option to release the current lease and exit.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dhclient.8">dhclient(8)</a>
         now avoids inappropriate changes to
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/resolv.conf.5">resolv.conf(5)</a>
@@ -327,20 +327,20 @@
 
 <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/bgpd.8">bgpd(8)</a> improvements:
     <ul>
-    <li>The default filter actions was changed from allow to deny.
+    <li>The default filter action was changed from allow to deny.
     <li>The config option 'announce (all|self|none|default-route)'
         has been deprecated and superseded by filter configuration.
     <li>Improved prefix-sets both in speed and user experience.
     <li>Introduced as-sets to match ASPATH against large lists of AS numbers.
-    <li>Support for BGP Origin Validation.
+    <li>Support for BGP Origin Validation
         <a href="https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6811">RFC 6811</a>
         through the <code>roa-set</code> directive.
     <li>Added origin-sets for matching prefix / origin AS pairs efficently.
-    <li>Some syntax cleanups; newlines are optional inside expansion
-        lists (previously newlines needed to be escaped), but in neighbor,
+    <li>Some syntax cleanups: newlines are optional inside expansion
+        lists (previously newlines needed to be escaped) but, in neighbor,
         group and rdomain blocks multiple statements have to be on new lines.
     <li>Reduce the amount of work done during a configuration reload.
-    <li>Make config reload not block other event handling in the
+    <li>Config reloading no longer blocks other event handling in the
         route decision engine.
     <li>Better support and bugfixes for multiple bgpd processes
         running in different rdomains.
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/uid_from_user.3">uid_from_user(3)</a>
         and
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/gid_from_group.3">gid_from_group(3)</a>
-        were added to the C library and are now used in several programs,
+        were added to the C library and are now used in several programs
         to speed up repeated lookups.
     <li>New semaphore implementation making
         <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/sem_post.3">sem_post(3)</a>
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@
         now changes partition information only when all user
         input is valid.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/relayd.8">relayd(8)</a> has
-        improved log directives in it's configuration file for finer
+        improved log directives in its configuration file for finer
         grained control of what gets logged.
     <li><a href="https://man.openbsd.org/tmux.1">tmux(1)</a>
         now handles terminfo colors greater than 256 correctly.
@@ -458,6 +458,7 @@
     </ul>
 <p>
 
+<!-- XXX should be 7.9 -->
 <li><a href="https://www.openssh.com/releasenotes.html#7.8">OpenSSH 7.8</a>
     <ul>
     <li>New features:
@@ -490,9 +491,9 @@
          in <a href="http://man.openbsd.org/sshd.8">sshd(8)</a>
          authentication log messages.
       </ul>
-    <li>Non-exhaustive list of Bugfixes:
+    <li>Non-exhaustive list of bug fixes:
       <ul>	
-      <li><a href="http://man.openbsd.org/ssh.1">ssh(1)</a>ssh(1),
+      <li><a href="http://man.openbsd.org/ssh.1">ssh(1)</a>:
 	<a href="http://man.openbsd.org/ssh-keygen.1">ssh-keygen(1)</a>:
 	avoid spurious "invalid format" errors when attempting to load
 	PEM private keys while using an incorrect passphrase.
@@ -508,7 +509,7 @@
       <li><a href="http://man.openbsd.org/sshd.8">sshd(8)</a>: do not
          fail closed when configured with a text key revocation list
          that contains a too-short key.
-      <li><a href="http://man.openbsd.org/ssh.1">ssh(1)</a>:treat
+      <li><a href="http://man.openbsd.org/ssh.1">ssh(1)</a>: treat
 	connections with ProxyJump specified the same as ones with a
 	ProxyCommand set with regards to hostname canonicalisation
 	(i.e. don't try to canonicalise the hostname unless
@@ -560,7 +561,7 @@
         has been entirely rewritten and now figures out MULTI_PACKAGES and
 	variable substitution almost 100%.
       <li>New packages now run maintenance database tools like 
-        update-desktop-database  just once instead of after 
+        update-desktop-database just once instead of after 
 	every package addition/removal.
     </ul>
     <dl>