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retrieving revision 1.26
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diff -u -r1.26 -r1.27
--- www/73.html	2023/04/04 02:05:17	1.26
+++ www/73.html	2023/04/04 03:09:41	1.27
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@
 	    Added saving and restoring guest PKRU to <a
 		href="https://man.openbsd.org/vmm.4">vmm(4)</a>. Expose the PKU cpuid
 		bit to the guest if in use on the host.
-	<li>Made <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/vmd.8">vmd(8)</a> scan the pci bus to determine bootorder strings.
+	<li>Made <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/vmd.8">vmd(8)</a> scan the PCI bus to determine bootorder strings.
   </ul>
 
 <li>Various new userland features:
@@ -560,8 +560,8 @@
 <li>New or improved network hardware support:
   <ul>
   <li>Enabled <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/em.4">em(4)</a> IPv4,
-	TCP and UDP checksum offloading and VLAN HW tagging on devices with 82575, 82576,
-	i350 and i210 chipsets.
+	TCP and UDP checksum offloading and hardware VLAN tagging on devices
+	with 82575, 82576, i350 and i210 chipsets.
   <li>Improved <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/mcx.4">mcx(4)</a>
 	performance by using interrupt-based command completion.
   <li>Fixed a panic seen with <a
@@ -581,12 +581,12 @@
   <ul>
   <li>Bumped tsleep timeout for <a
 	href="https://man.openbsd.org/bwfm.4">bwfm(4)</a> PCI devices to help
-	prevent failures loading firmware, particularly on Apple M2 laptops.OA
+	prevent failures loading firmware, particularly on Apple M2 laptops.
   <li>Implemented alternative mailbox handling mechanism required by
 	newer <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/bwfm.4">bwfm(4)</a> firmware.
   <li>Fixed <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/bwfm.4">bwfm(4)</a>
 	issues with suspend/resume and possible firmware crashes on the M2
-	Macbook Air.
+	MacBook Air.
 
   <li>Prevented an <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/iwx.4">iwx(4)</a> firmware error when authentication to the AP times out.
 
@@ -784,7 +784,7 @@
 		hash/flowid for <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/pf.4">pf(4)</a> state
 		keys.  With this change, pf will hash traffic the same way that
 		hardware using a stoeplitz key will hash incoming traffic on rings.
-		stoeplitz is also used by the tcp stack to generate a flow id, which
+		stoeplitz is also used by the TCP stack to generate a flow id, which
 		is used to pick which transmit ring is used on nics with multiple
 		queues too. using the same algorithm throughout the stack encourages
 		affinity of packets to rings and softnet threads the whole way
@@ -793,7 +793,7 @@
 		destination port 0 in <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/pf.4">pf(4)</a>
 		and the stack.
 	<li>Fixed a endian swap bug causing problems with <a
-		href="https://man.openbsd.org/vlan.4">vlans(4)</a> on <a
+		href="https://man.openbsd.org/vlan.4">vlan(4)</a> on <a
 		href="https://man.openbsd.org/em.4">em(4)</a> sparc64 systems.
 	<li>Denied "pipex no" tunnel setting for <a
 		href="https://man.openbsd.org/pppx.4">pppx(4)</a> interfaces.
@@ -964,7 +964,7 @@
 	sanitize redirect URIs from <a
 	href="https://man.openbsd.org/ftp.1">ftp(1)</a> fetch before printing.
   <li>Prevent an <a
-	href="https://man.openbsd.org/unwind.8">unwind(8)</a> crash when a tcp
+	href="https://man.openbsd.org/unwind.8">unwind(8)</a> crash when a TCP
 	query is larger than the length field indicated.
 
   <li>Preserve the original order of nameservers as configured via <a
@@ -982,7 +982,7 @@
 	href="https://man.openbsd.org/ifconfig.8">ifconfig(8)</a> -M (mac) to
 	find the mac address on an interface and print it.
   <li>Added support for configuring interfaces by lladdr to support
-	interface configurations bound to a specfic hardware device. The "if"
+	interface configurations bound to a specific hardware device. The "if"
 	part of the <a
 	href="https://man.openbsd.org/hostname.if.5">hostname.if(5)</a>
 	configuration file can now be a MAC address.
@@ -1000,7 +1000,7 @@
 
   <li>Improvements in <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/nc.1">nc(1)</a>:
   <ul>
-    <li>Stop claiming connection success in udp mode unless true.
+    <li>Stop claiming connection success in UDP mode unless true.
     <li>Do not test the connection in non-interactive mode. The test
 	writes characters to the socket which can corrupt data that is
 	possible piped into nc.