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--- www/74.html	2023/10/14 19:53:05	1.79
+++ www/74.html	2023/10/14 21:13:43	1.80
@@ -116,7 +116,7 @@
   <li>On arm64, use the deep idle state available on Apple M1/M2 cores
 	in the idle loop and for suspend, resulting in power savings.
   <!-- reverted <li>In <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/xhci.4">xhci(4)</a>, when
-	detaching devices when we suspend, we need to continue processing
+	detaching devices during suspend, must continue processing
 	command completion events. This fixes USB suspend/resume in Apple
 	M1/M2. -->
   </ul>
@@ -498,7 +498,7 @@
 	the RGMII interface before taking the PHY out of reset.
   <li>Improve <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dwqe.4">dwqe(4)</a> and
 	determine PHY mode and pass the appropriate flags down to the PHY when
-	we attach it.
+	attaching.
   <li>Report in <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dmesg.8">dmesg(8)</a> on
       which gmac the <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/dwqe.4">dwqe(4)</a>
       driver is attaching to.
@@ -594,25 +594,25 @@
 
 <li>Security improvements:
   <ul>
-  <li>We enabled support for branch target identification (BTI) in both
+  <li>Enabled support for branch target identification (BTI) in both
 	the kernel and userland.  On hardware that supports this feautre, it
 	helps enforcing control flow integrety by making sure malicious code
 	cannot jump into the middle of a function.
-  <li>We enabled support for pointer authentication (PAC) in userland.  On
+  <li>Enabled support for pointer authentication (PAC) in userland.  On
 	hardware that supports this feature it helps enforcing control flow
 	integrety by making sure malicious code cannot manipulate a
 	function's return address.
-  <li>On the amd64 architecture, we enabled support for indirect
+  <li>On the amd64 architecture, enabled support for indirect
 	branch tracking (IBT) in both the kernel and userland.  On hardware
 	that supports this feature, it helps enforcing control flow integrety
 	by making sure malicious code cannot jump into the middle of a
 	function.
-  <li>On the arm64 architecture, we enabled support for branch target
+  <li>On the arm64 architecture, enabled support for branch target
 	identification (BTI) in both the kernel and userland.  On hardware
 	that supports this feature, it helps enforcing control flow integrety
 	by making sure malicious code cannot jump into the middle of a
 	function.
-  <li>On the arm64 architecture, we enabled support for pointer
+  <li>On the arm64 architecture, enabled support for pointer
 	authentication (PAC) in userland.  On hardware that supports this
 	feature it helps enforcing control flow integrety by making sure
 	malicious code cannot manipulate a function's return address.
@@ -909,8 +909,8 @@
 	remove artificial limit of 2 hours on a PIO lifetime.
   <li>Make <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/ypldap.8">ypldap(8)</a>
 	more resilient when some servers are
-	misbehaving: keep trying LDAP servers until we get full results from
-	one, rather than just until one accepts the TCP connection.
+	misbehaving: keep trying LDAP servers until full results arrive
+	rather than just until one accepts the TCP connection.
   <li>New <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/ifconfig.8#wgdescription"
       >wgdescription</a> parameter to
       <a href="https://man.openbsd.org/ifconfig.8">ifconfig(8)</a>