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retrieving revision 1.18
diff -u -r1.17 -r1.18
--- www/Attic/bank-donation.html	2008/04/04 20:50:47	1.17
+++ www/Attic/bank-donation.html	2008/04/05 21:24:34	1.18
@@ -45,9 +45,8 @@
 If the transfer process has a comment field, give the name you want
 to see listed on our <a href="donations.html">Donations page</a> and
 perhaps mail Theo a gentle reminder to notice it.  Please note that
-these since these transfers are strictly donations, the project does
-not like transactions which appear to be in exchange for advertising
-via links.
+these transfers are strictly donations -- the project does not like
+transactions which appear to be in exchange for advertising via links.
 <p>
 These various bank transfer systems can have various transaction fees.  In
 general with the new IBAN system there should be no or minimal costs when
@@ -71,7 +70,7 @@
 <hr>
 <a href="donations.html"><img height="24" width="24" src="back.gif" border="0" alt="OpenBSD"></a><a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>
 
-<br><small>$OpenBSD: bank-donation.html,v 1.17 2008/04/04 20:50:47 deraadt Exp $</small>
+<br><small>$OpenBSD: bank-donation.html,v 1.18 2008/04/05 21:24:34 deraadt Exp $</small>
 
 </body>
 </html>