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diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
--- www/Attic/checklist.html	1999/06/01 22:26:38	1.16
+++ www/Attic/checklist.html	1999/08/15 02:23:45	1.17
@@ -56,13 +56,13 @@
        any install docs.  You may need to modify the WRKSRC variable
        in the makefile as well as generate initial patches to configure
        for OpenBSD.
-    <p>Note: Patches go in the directory `patches' and are names patch-xx
+    <p>Note: Patches go in the directory `patches' and are named patch-xx
        where xx should be aa, ab, ..., az, ba, bb ... zz.
        <ul>
 	<li>only patch one source file per patchfile, please
 	<li>use diff -u to generate patches
 	<li>all patches MUST be relative to ${WRKSRC}
-	<li>add a small explaination of the patch role in the patchfile before
+	<li>add a small explanation of the patch role in the patchfile before
             the patch itself, and an OpenBSD CVS tag
             <code>&#36;OpenBSD&#36;</code>
        </ul>
@@ -142,8 +142,8 @@
         Create dummy versions of the package files.  Edit DESCR and COMMENT.
      <p>COMMENT is a <strong>SHORT</strong> one-line description of the port
      (max. 60 characters). Do NOT include the package name (or version number
-     of the software) in the comment. Do NOT start by an uppercase letter
-     unless semantically significant, do NOT end by a dot.
+     of the software) in the comment. Do NOT start with an uppercase letter
+     unless semantically significant, do NOT end with a period.
      <p>DESCR is a longer description of the port. One to a few paragraphs
         concisely explaining what the port does is sufficient.
      <p>PLIST is kept empty at this point.
@@ -175,9 +175,9 @@
 </pre>
 
    <li>Create pkg/PLIST<br>
-       After the install is complete use the developers command:
+       After the install is complete use the developer's command:
     <p><code>make plist</code>
-    <p>which makes a the file PLIST-auto in the pkg directory.  This file
+    <p>which makes the file PLIST-auto in the pkg directory.  This file
        is a candidate packing list.  Beware: the files are found by
        timestamp.  This means it does NOT:
        <ul>
@@ -205,7 +205,7 @@
    <p>
    <li>uninstall and reinstall; repeat until perfect.<br>
        <em>Perfect</em> is when everything installs and uninstalls
-       in its proper location.  `<code>pkg_delete &lt;pkg_name&gt</code>' is
+       in its proper location.  `<code>pkg_delete &lt;pkg_name&gt;</code>' is
        used to uninstall.  `sudo make reinstall' is used to reinstall.  See the
        `<code>pkg_create</code>' man page for other commands that may be added
        to PLIST to ensure all is cleaned up.  After an uninstall the command
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
 		platforms (the DEC Alpha is good  because it has only static libraries
 		and because sizeof int != sizeof long; Sun SPARC is good because it is
 		very common and because its byte order is the reverse of i386; if you
-		developed on SPARC, of course, y ou'd want it tested on i386).
+		developed on SPARC, of course, you'd want it tested on i386).
 		<P>The ports@openbsd mailing list is a good place to find porting-savy
 		people with different platforms!
 		<li>Incorporate any feedback you get. Test it again on your platform.
@@ -301,6 +301,6 @@
   <a href="porting.html"><img height=24 width=24 src=back.gif
    border=0 alt=Porting></a> 
   <a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>
-  <br><small>$OpenBSD: checklist.html,v 1.16 1999/06/01 22:26:38 espie Exp $</small>
+  <br><small>$OpenBSD: checklist.html,v 1.17 1999/08/15 02:23:45 marc Exp $</small>
  </body>
 </html>