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RCS file: /cvsrepo/anoncvs/cvs/www/Attic/checklist.html,v
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retrieving revision 1.24
diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
--- www/Attic/checklist.html	2000/03/24 14:08:07	1.23
+++ www/Attic/checklist.html	2000/05/31 10:55:26	1.24
@@ -278,9 +278,13 @@
 <ul>
 <li>
 COMMENT is a <strong>SHORT</strong> one-line description of the port
-(max. 60 characters). Do NOT include the package name (or version number
-of the software) in the comment. Do NOT start with an uppercase letter
-unless semantically significant, do NOT end with a period.
+(max. 60 characters). Do <strong>NOT</strong> include the package 
+name (or version number of the software) in the comment. 
+Do <strong>NOT</strong> start with an uppercase letter
+unless semantically significant, 
+do <strong>NOT</strong> end with a period.
+<strong>DON'T EVER START WITH AN UNDETERMINATE ARTICLE SUCH AS `a' or `as',
+remove the article altogether.</strong>
 <li>
 DESCR is a longer description of the port. One to a few paragraphs
 concisely explaining what the port does is sufficient.
@@ -470,6 +474,6 @@
 <a href="porting.html"><img height=24 width=24 src=back.gif
  border=0 alt=Porting></a> 
 <a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>
-<br><small>$OpenBSD: checklist.html,v 1.23 2000/03/24 14:08:07 wvdputte Exp $</small>
+<br><small>$OpenBSD: checklist.html,v 1.24 2000/05/31 10:55:26 espie Exp $</small>
 </body>
 </html>