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+++ www/Attic/getting.html	2007/09/06 16:33:55	1.3
@@ -23,21 +23,21 @@
 
 <p>
 The best way to get an OpenBSD release (<i>-release</i>) and support us
-is to buy a 3-CD set. More informations are available on our
+is to buy a 3-CD set. More information is available on our
 <a href="orders.html">ordering page</a>.
 
 <p>
-If you choose not to buy an OpenBSD CD-ROM, OpenBSD can be also
-installed with a CDROM you burnt yourself. To achieve this, you have to
+If you choose not to buy an OpenBSD CD-ROM, you can also install
+OpenBSD with a CDROM you burn yourself. To achieve this, you have to
 download an ISO (i.e. <i>install42.iso</i> for <i>4.2</i>) for the
-architecture you are running, on one of our
-<a href="ftp.html">mirror</a>. ISOs are roughly 200MB in size, and you 
+architecture you are running, from one of our
+<a href="ftp.html">mirrors</a>. ISOs are roughly 200MB in size, and you 
 will not need anything else but the <a href="faq/faq15.html">application
 packages</a>.
 
 <p>
 Note that the paragraph above is also valid for the people interested by
-running <i>-current</i>. You can fetch <i>install42.iso</i> of the
+running <i>-current</i>. You can fetch <i>install42.iso</i> from the
 latest snapshot and install or upgrade your system very quickly.
 
 <hr>
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 <p>
 Connect to that ftp mirror site and go into the directory
 pub/OpenBSD/4.2/ which contains these files and directories. This is a
-list of what you will see:
+list of what you should see:
 
 <pre>
         ANNOUNCEMENT    amd64/          mac68k/         sparc64/
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-It is quite likely that you will want at LEAST the following files which
+It is quite likely that you will want AT LEAST the following files which
 apply to all the architectures OpenBSD supports. 
 
 <pre>
@@ -105,7 +105,8 @@
 
 <p>
 Next, go into the directory that applies to your architecture, for
-example, <i>i386</i>. This is a list of what you will see:
+example, <i>i386</i>. You should see something similar to the
+following:
 
 <pre>
         INSTALL.i386    cd42.iso        floppyB42.fs    pxeboot*
@@ -136,7 +137,7 @@
 <hr>
 <a href="index.html"><img height=24 width=24 src=back.gif border=0 alt=OpenBSD></a>
 <a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>
-<br><small>$OpenBSD: getting.html,v 1.2 2007/09/06 16:15:33 deraadt Exp $</small>
+<br><small>$OpenBSD: getting.html,v 1.3 2007/09/06 16:33:55 ian Exp $</small>
 
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