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--- www/Attic/ports.html	1998/07/04 22:02:41	1.22
+++ www/Attic/ports.html	1998/11/17 01:10:30	1.23
@@ -23,13 +23,14 @@
    OpenBSD is a fairly complete system of its own, but still there is a lot
    of software that one might want see added. However there is the problem
    on where to draw the line as to what to include, as well as the occasional
-   licensing and export restriction problems.  In what is supposed to be
-   small stand-alone UNIX-like operating system, some things just can't be
+   licensing and export restriction problems.  As OpenBSD is supposed to be
+   a small stand-alone UNIX-like operating system, some things just can't be
    shipped with the system.
   <p>
    We wanted to find a way for users to easily get software we don't provide
-   and started to look around. We didn't have to look far as a sibling project,
-   <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/">FreeBSD</a>, had an excellent mechanism
+   and started to look around. We didn't have to look far, as sibling project
+   <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/">FreeBSD</a> already had an 
+	excellent mechanism
    for exactly this purpose called
    <a href="http://www.freebsd.org/ports/">"The ports collection"</a>.
   <p>
@@ -70,12 +71,12 @@
    You can also ftp the 2.3 version from the pub/OpenBSD/2.3 directory
    on any of the <a href=ftp.html>ftp mirror sites</a>.
    Note: this version, also on the 2.3 CDROM, is not the most
-   recent version.  You likely want to get and use a newer version
+   recent version.  You likely will want to get and use a newer version
   <h3><font color=#0000e0>Example use of the Ports tree</font></h3>
   <p>
    Let's say you managed to get a ports tree and you want to compile and
    install the archiving utility <code>unzip</code>.  You should be able to
-   something like:
+	do something like this:
 <pre>
 % cd /usr/ports/archivers/unzip
 % su
@@ -103,17 +104,17 @@
    as well as OpenBSD specific policies and hints.
   <h3><font color=#0000e0>Problems and contacts</font></h3>
   <p>
-   If you have trouble with ports please send mail to the OpenBSD
+   If you have trouble with ports please send e-mail to the OpenBSD
    ports mailing list, <a href="mailto:ports@openbsd.org">ports@OpenBSD.ORG</a>.
-   Patches are always appreciated, but in any case please provide:
+   Corrections are always welcome, but in any case do please provide:
    <ul>
-    <li>The output of <code>uname -a</code>
-    <li>Your OpenBSD version, including any patches you may have applied.
+    <li>The output of <code>uname -a</code>,
+    <li>Your OpenBSD version, including any patches you may have applied,
     <li>A complete description of the problem.
    </ul>
   <hr>
  <a href="index.html"><img height=24 width=24 src=back.gif border=0 alt=OpenBSD></a> 
  <a href=mailto:www@openbsd.org>www@openbsd.org</a>
- <br><small>$OpenBSD: ports.html,v 1.22 1998/07/04 22:02:41 marc Exp $</small>
+ <br><small>$OpenBSD: ports.html,v 1.23 1998/11/17 01:10:30 espie Exp $</small>
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