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 ("the three-line configuration file we needed to modify ... on OpenBSD was 
 much simpler to deal with than the equivalent configuration file on 
 the Linux systems we've tested").
-Overall a favorable review of someof the new stuff in 3.6.
+Overall a favorable review of some of the new stuff in 3.6.
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 <a href="http://www.newsforge.com/article.pl?sid=04/11/16/1544210">
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 misc@, November 8, 2004</strong></font><br>
 Theo recounts the struggle to get Intel to provide redistributable
 versions of the firmware for their wireless chipsets, and their
-ultimate refusal to allow OpenBSD to redistribute the chipsets.
+ultimate refusal to allow OpenBSD to redistribute the chipsets' firmware.
 Includes a caveat about Intel's disingenuous "FAQ", typical of many
 corporate FAQs that answer questions nobody actually thought
 to ask, and don't truthfully answer the questions you want hard answers to.
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 <a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>
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