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--- www/Attic/products.html	1998/07/24 21:18:50	1.3
+++ www/Attic/products.html	1998/07/29 18:50:26	1.4
@@ -9,18 +9,18 @@
 
 <p>
 Various commercial products for OpenBSD are available from the following
-companies.
+companies:
 <p>
 
 <ul>
 <li><strong>Open Sound System</strong><br>
 (i386 only)<br>
-A substantially spiffed-up commercial version of the Audio Hardware
+A substantially spiffed-up commercial version of the OpenBSD audio
 device drivers is available from
 <a href=http://www.opensound.com/>http://www.opensound.com/</a>.
 These replacement drivers are compatible with the audio drivers
-OpenBSD ships with, but they support many addition cards and
-features of the cards.
+OpenBSD ships with, but they support many additional cards and take
+full advantage of these cards' features.
 <p>
 <li><strong>RTMX</strong><br>
 <a href=http://www.rtmx.com>RTMX</a> sells a version of OpenBSD
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
 <hr>
 <a href=index.html><img height=24 width=24 src=back.gif border=0 alt=OpenBSD></a> 
 <a href=mailto:www@openbsd.org>www@openbsd.org</a>
-<br><small>$OpenBSD: products.html,v 1.3 1998/07/24 21:18:50 deraadt Exp $</small>
+<br><small>$OpenBSD: products.html,v 1.4 1998/07/29 18:50:26 jkatz Exp $</small>
 
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