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--- www/Attic/translation-explained.html	2005/06/28 18:43:45	1.6
+++ www/Attic/translation-explained.html	2005/07/02 00:22:23	1.7
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@
 
 <pre>
   $ cd /home/username/devel/openbsd/
-  $ cvs -d "username@steelix.kd85.com" checkout -d "steelix-www" www
+  $ cvs -d "username@steelix.kd85.com:/cvs" checkout -d "steelix-www" www
 </pre>
 
 <p>
@@ -271,7 +271,7 @@
 
 <h4>Initial checkout of the 'www' CVS module</h4>
 To obtain a working copy of the <i>www</i> CVS module, you need to find
-out an OpenBSD anonymous CVS mirror near you that is updated frequently.
+an OpenBSD anonymous CVS mirror near you that is updated frequently.
 Suppose you are located in Germany. According to the <a
 href="anoncvs.html">OpenBSD AnonCVS</a> page,
 <i>anoncvs2.de.openbsd.org</i> looks like a good candidate. It is
@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@
 
 <p>
 The <i>www translation</i> CVS module is organized in an identical
-fashion. While the <i>www</i> CVS module is your source for the english
+fashion. While the <i>www</i> CVS module is your source for the English
 original files that you need to translate or sync against, the <i>www
 translation</i> CVS module will host all your translation work as we
 mentioned earlier.
@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-That was easy. Next we would copy a english original file that we would
+That was easy. Next we would copy an English original file that we would
 like to translate from the <i>www</i> module (e.g.
 <i>openbsd-www/faq/pf/index.html</i>) into the es/ directory and would
 add it as well:
@@ -543,7 +543,7 @@
     Guidelines</a></font></h3>
 
 <p>
-Following is a set of general translation guidelines that will help you
+The following is a set of general translation guidelines that will help you
 get your job as a translator done correctly.
 
 <h4>Stick to translating the pages!</h4>
@@ -552,6 +552,11 @@
 tags, email adresses or anything else that hasn't been in the page
 before!</strong>
 
+<p>
+If you do have suggestions or corrections concerning the content of a
+page, send them to <a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>,
+so they can be included by one of the developers.
+
 <h4>Translation Tags</h4>
 If you have freshly translated a page to your language you would like to
 see it committed. And it should and will be maintained. To make this
@@ -601,13 +606,13 @@
 <tt>Originally [blah... ]</tt> ID tag again.
 
 <p>
-But you should check from file to file whether there's everything all
-right and compare to other files, your own ones or even those from
-other languages.
+But you should check from file to file whether everything is correct
+and compare to other files, your own or even those from other languages.
 
 <p>
 <strong><font color="#ff0000">Note:</font></strong> the amount and
-places of spaces and words are absolutely precise and not to be changed!
+positions of spaces and words in the tags are absolutely precise and not
+to be changed!
 Otherwise you will find your file not recognized correctly by the
 scripts which build the <a
 href="http://steelix.kd85.com/translation/status.html">status page</a>!
@@ -639,7 +644,8 @@
 <p>
 When you have the <em>orders.html</em> file translated and already in
 your language directory, you can then strip the
-<tt><strong>../</strong></tt> off and let it point to your directory.
+<tt><strong>../</strong></tt> off and let it point to the file in your
+directory.
 
 <p>
 For a file in the <em>faq/</em> directory, this is a bit different,
@@ -719,16 +725,16 @@
 </pre>
 
 <h4>Accentuated letters</h4>
-Since some languages such as French makes extensive use of accentuated
+Since some languages such as French make extensive use of accentuated
 letters, a translator must make sure that the accents on the letters are
-put in the right places and in the right styles (&eacute; not &egrave;
+put in the right places and in the right styles (&egrave; not &eacute;
 in a word such as &quot;probl&egrave;me&quot;). The HTML code must not
 contain the accentuated letters in HTML codification format (such as
 &quot;&amp;eacute;&quot; for &quot;&eacute;&quot;).
 
 <h4>Punctuation</h4>
 There are also differences in punctuation between English and other
-languages. And you need to respect them. Take French for example. The
+languages, and you need to respect them. Take French for example. The
 &quot;!&quot;, &quot;?&quot;, &quot;:&quot; signs always take a space
 before and a space after as in &quot;Le fran&ccedil;ais est une
 sacr&eacute;e langue ! n'est-ce pas ?&quot;.
@@ -779,7 +785,7 @@
 <a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>
 <br>
 <small>
-$OpenBSD: translation-explained.html,v 1.6 2005/06/28 18:43:45 saad Exp $
+$OpenBSD: translation-explained.html,v 1.7 2005/07/02 00:22:23 saad Exp $
 </small>
 
 </body>