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 <li>Read-only access for everyone
 </ul>
 
-<h3 id="starting">Getting started using Anonymous CVS</h3>
+<h3 id="starting">Pre-loading the source tree</h3>
 
-While you can download the entire source tree from an anoncvs server, you can
-save time and bandwidth by preloading your tree with the source tarballs.
+While you can download the entire source tree from an AnonCVS server, you can
+save time and bandwidth by pre-loading your tree with the source tarballs.
 This is particularly true if you are running
 <a href="stable.html"><i>-stable</i></a>, as relatively few files change
 between the <i>-release</i> and <i>-stable</i>.
 
 <p>
 The source files for download from the <a href="ftp.html">mirrors</a> are
-separated into two files to reduce the time required to download for those
-wishing to work with only one part of the tree.
+separated into two files to reduce the download time for those wishing to
+work with only one part of the tree.
 The kernel sources are in <tt>sys.tar.gz</tt> and the userland sources
 are in <tt>src.tar.gz</tt>.
 
+<p>
+The following commands assume you have followed
+<a href="faq/faq5.html#wsrc">these instructions</a> to give a non-root
+user write access to the src, ports and xenocara directories.
+
 <blockquote><pre>
-# <b>cd /usr/src</b>
-# <b>tar xzf /tmp/src.tar.gz</b>
-# <b>tar xzf /tmp/sys.tar.gz</b>
-# <b>cd /usr</b>
-# <b>tar xzf /tmp/xenocara.tar.gz</b>
-# <b>tar xzf /tmp/ports.tar.gz</b>
+$ <b>cd /usr/src</b>
+$ <b>tar xzf /tmp/src.tar.gz</b>
+$ <b>tar xzf /tmp/sys.tar.gz</b>
+$ <b>cd /usr</b>
+$ <b>tar xzf /tmp/ports.tar.gz</b>
+$ <b>tar xzf /tmp/xenocara.tar.gz</b>
 </pre></blockquote>
 
 <h3 id="using">Using CVS to get and update your source trees</h3>