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@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@
 detail too little.  Any question should include at least the
 <a href="faq/faq5.html#Flavors">version</a> of OpenBSD (i.e.,
 "3.2-stable", "3.3-current as of July 20, 2003").  Any hardware related
-questions should also include mentioning the platform (i.e., sparc,
+questions should mention the platform (i.e., sparc,
 alpha, etc.), and provide a full
 <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=dmesg&amp;sektion=8">dmesg(8)</a>).
 Hardware model numbers, unfortunately, don't indicate much about the
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@
 
 <h3>CVS Changes Mailing Lists</h3>
 Every time a developer commits a change to the OpenBSD 
-<a href="">CVS tree</a>, a message is mailed out to all the subscribers
+<a href="why-cvs.html">CVS tree</a>, a message is mailed out to all the subscribers
 of these lists, containing the commit comments. 
 
 <dl>
@@ -272,7 +272,7 @@
 by the <a href="http://lists.openbsd.org">web interface</a> or through
 <a href="mailto:majordomo@openbsd.org">Majordomo</a>.  You can change
 your email address without having to unsubscribe and resubscribe, you
-can temporarily disable your message for a few days while you go on
+can temporarily disable your message delivery for a few days while you go on
 vacation, and much more.  The user is invited to spend some time reading
 through the options, available by sending
 <a href="mailto:majordomo@openbsd.org">Majordomo</a> a message
@@ -282,9 +282,9 @@
 
 <p>
 As an example, if you were going on vacation for two weeks and didn't
-wish to come back to several thousand e-mails, you can disable the
-messages from the mail server for the time of your vacation and have
-them automaticly resume upon your scheduled return using the command:
+wish to come back to several thousand e-mails, you can disable
+message delivery from the mail server for the time of your vacation and have
+delivery automaticly resume upon your scheduled return using the command:
 <pre>
      set all nomail-14d
 </pre>
@@ -360,7 +360,7 @@
 
 <p>
 German:
-<strong>liste@openbsd.de</strong>
+<b>liste@openbsd.de</b>
 <br>To subscribe, please visit the URL at:
 <a href="https://www.openbsd.de/listen/listinfo/liste">https://www.openbsd.de/listen/listinfo/liste</a>.
 
@@ -438,7 +438,7 @@
 <hr>
 <a href="index.html"><img height=24 width=24 src="back.gif" border=0 alt="OpenBSD"></a> 
 <a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a>
-<br><small>$OpenBSD: mail.html,v 1.68 2003/08/05 19:05:33 nick Exp $</small>
+<br><small>$OpenBSD: mail.html,v 1.69 2003/08/08 21:43:37 nick Exp $</small>
 
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