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--- www/pegasos.html	2003/11/01 02:22:11	1.6
+++ www/pegasos.html	2003/11/03 14:12:21	1.7
@@ -59,7 +59,8 @@
 <p>
 The OpenBSD/pegasos port was started early 2003 when Genesi contacted
 Dale Rahn to port OpenBSD to their newly released motherboard.
-After several months of hiatus, the port was revived.
+After several months of hiatus, the port was revived and eventually
+made public.
 </p>
 
 <hr>
@@ -67,8 +68,9 @@
 <h3><font color="#0000e0"><strong>Current status:</strong></font></h3>
 
 <p>
-The Pegasos I is supported at the current time, hopefully the Pegasos II
-hardware will be available to developers soon and it will be supported.
+The Pegasos I is the only supported board at the current time; hopefully
+the Pegasos II hardware will be available to developers soon and it will
+be supported as well.
 </p>
 
 <hr>
@@ -92,8 +94,8 @@
 
 <p>
 <ul>
-  <li>Peg II
-  <li>...
+  <li>Pegasos II support
+  <li>Improve the port-specific documentation
 </ul>
 
 <hr>
@@ -175,7 +177,7 @@
 <ul>
 <li>Aironet 802.11DS PCI (<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=an&amp;sektion=4">an</a>)
 <li>WaveLAN 802.11DS PCI and CardBus (<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=wi&amp;sektion=4">wi</a>)
-<li>Prism II and Prism 2.5 PCI and Cardbus (<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=wi&amp;sektion=4">wi</a>). See <a href="i386.html">i386</a> for a complete list.
+<li>Prism II and Prism 2.5 PCI and Cardbus (<a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=wi&amp;sektion=4">wi</a>). Refer to the <a href="i386.html">i386</a> platform supported hardware for a complete list.
 </ul>
 
 <li><strong>SCSI and IDE Host Adapters</strong>
@@ -202,9 +204,9 @@
 
 <li><strong>Drives</strong>
 <ul>
-<li>All IDE devices supported on the <a href="i386.html">i386</a>.
-<li>All ATAPI drives supported on the <a href="i386.html">i386</a>.
-<li>All SCSI drives supported on the <a href="i386.html">i386</a>.
+<li>All IDE devices supported on the <a href="i386.html">i386</a> platform.
+<li>All ATAPI drives supported on the <a href="i386.html">i386</a> platform.
+<li>All SCSI drives supported on the <a href="i386.html">i386</a> platform.
 </ul>
 
 <li><strong>USB Controllers/Hubs</strong>
@@ -278,7 +280,7 @@
 </strong></font></h3>
 <ul>
 <li>Pegasos II 
-<li>Firewire is not yet supported by OpenBSD.
+<li>Firewire is not supported by OpenBSD yet.
 </ul>
 
 <hr>
@@ -299,7 +301,8 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-There are several installation media provided:
+<!-- There are several installation media provided: -->
+Currently, only one installation media is provided:
 <ul>
   <li><strong>CD boot</strong>
   <p>
@@ -331,8 +334,8 @@
 
 <p>
 <ul>
-<li>OpenBSD has a problem finding itself when it is installed on disks
-    which are not the primary disk.
+<li>OpenBSD has a problem finding itself when it is not installed on the
+primary disk.
 </ul>
 
 <hr>
@@ -342,7 +345,7 @@
 <br>
 <small><a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a></small>
 <br>
-<small>$OpenBSD: pegasos.html,v 1.6 2003/11/01 02:22:11 jolan Exp $</small>
+<small>$OpenBSD: pegasos.html,v 1.7 2003/11/03 14:12:21 miod Exp $</small>
 
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