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@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 <h2><font color=#e00000>Changes made between OpenBSD 3.1 and OpenBSD-current</font><hr></h2>
 
 <p>
-This is a partial list of the major machine independent changes
+This is a partial list of the major machine-independent changes
 (i.e., these are the changes people ask about most often).  Port
 specific changes have also been made, and are sometimes mentioned
 in the pages for the specific <a href="plat.html">platforms</a>.
@@ -54,25 +54,25 @@
 
 <p>
 <h3><font color=#0000e0>We are working on OpenBSD-current.</font></h3><p>
-The following list sums up (almost) all the changes made until May 24th.
+The following list sums up (almost) all the changes made up to May 24th.
 <ul>
 <li>Support mixed IPv4/IPv6 address lists in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pfctl&sektion=8">pfctl(8)</a>.
 <li>Add ssh-keysign(1).
 <li>Remove obsolete <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=dm&sektion=8&manpath=OpenBSD+3.0">dm(8)</a>.
 <li>Hunt for biodone() calls not made at splbio() spl, and fix them.
 <li>Improve cd9660 filesystem read-ahead performance.
-<li>support software brightness and backlight control on various macppc models.
-<li>allow <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=wsconsctl&sektion=8">wsconsctl(8)</a> to control brightness and backlight on displays which
+<li>Support software brightness and backlight control on various macppc models.
+<li>Allow <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=wsconsctl&sektion=8">wsconsctl(8)</a> to control brightness and backlight on displays which
 support this.
-<li>new libc IEEE floating-point code and libm routines for hppa.
+<li>New libc IEEE floating-point code and libm routines for hppa.
 <li>splassert on i386.
-<li>More steps towards the death of unsafe string functions.
+<li>More steps toward the death of unsafe string functions.
 <li>splassert on sparc64.
 <li>Add a <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=creator&sektion=4">creator(4)</a> driver for sparc64 Creator and Creator3D cards.
 <li>Jumbo <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=lpr&sektion=1">lpr(1)</a> changes including IPv6 support, new features, and bugfixes.
-<li>Still hppa memory management and low-level code fixes.
+<li>Still more hppa memory management and low-level code fixes.
 <li>Simple pmap optimization on macppc.
-<li>Did we mention that cleaning of the installation scripts, adding functionality yet reducing size?
+<li>Did we mention the cleaning of the installation scripts, adding functionality yet reducing size?
 <li>Allow ddb to do a stack trace into the kernel message buffer.
 <li><a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=isp&sektion=4">isp(4)</a> fixes.
 <li><font color=#e00000><strong>SECURITY FIX: Fix incorrect ACL check when using BSD authentication in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=sshd&sektion=8">sshd(8)</a>.</strong></font><br>
@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@
 <li>ECN support.
 <li>Support SNTP in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=rdate&sektion=8">rdate(8)</a>.
 <li>Fix infinite SIGFPE loop situations on vax.
-<li>Remove unnecessary setuid bits from binaries that either do not need it or
-which functionality requiring root privileges should only be invoked by root
+<li>Remove unnecessary setuid bit from binaries that either do not need it or
+whose functionality requiring root privileges should only be invoked by root
 anyways, or which can be changed into a setgid bit for a specific group.
 <li>Switch S/Key managment to per-user directories instead of a flat file and drop setuid bit on related tools.
 <li>Lots of <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ppp&sektion=8">ppp(8)</a> goodies.
@@ -116,11 +116,11 @@
 <li>Obtain a better licence for the hppa spmath routines.
 <li>Add an <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=url&sektion=4">url(4)</a> driver for Realtek RTL8150L-based USB cards.
 <li>mvme88k pmap bugfixes.
-<li>Various <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=usb&sektion=4">usb</a> drivers updates.
+<li>Various <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=usb&sektion=4">usb</a> driver updates.
 <li>Remove <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=rlogin&sektion=1&manpath=OpenBSD+3.0">rlogin(1)</a>,
 <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=rlogind&sektion=8&manpath=OpenBSD+3.0">rlogind(8)</a> and
 <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=rexecd&sektion=8&manpath=OpenBSD+3.0">rexecd(8)</a>.
-<li>Fix some wrong computations in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=newfs&sektion=8">newfs(8)</a>.
+<li>Fix several wrong computations in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=newfs&sektion=8">newfs(8)</a>.
 <li>Workaround ghost pcibus detection in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pchb&sektion=4">pchb(4)</a>.
 <li>Add a tuner driver for the <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=fms&sektion=4">fms(4)</a> radio cards.
 <li>Allow userland to know which pf rule created a specific state.
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
 <li>Switch mvme88k to the new MAKEDEV generation framework.
 <li>Implement the -s option in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.ccgi?query=m4&sektion=1">m4(1)</a>, for it to be POSIX-compliant.
 <li>Kill all mvme68k kernel compilation warnings.
-<li>Assorted mac68k code cleanup.
+<li>Assorted mac68k code cleanups.
 <li>Shared key support in hostap mode in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=wi&sektion=4">wi(4)</a>.
 <li>Make Xwsfb support <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=tga&sektion=4&arch=alpha">tga(4)</a> cards on alpha.
 <li>Fix a lock leak in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=ami&sektion=4">ami(4)</a>.
@@ -172,12 +172,12 @@
 <li>Allow explicit filtering of non-reassembled fragments in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=pf&sektion=4">pf(4)</a>.
 <li>Support more hardware and fix stability issues in the mac68k an network driver.
 <li>Improved Lithuanian keyboard map for <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=wscons&sektion=4">wscons(4)</a>.
-<li><font color=#e00000><strong>SECURITY FIX: Fix a buffer overflow in AFS/Kerberos token handling in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=sshd&sektion=8">sshd(8)</a>, and send a complete ticket.</strong></font><br>
+<li><font color=#e00000><strong>SECURITY FIX: fix a buffer overflow in AFS/Kerberos token handling in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=sshd&sektion=8">sshd(8)</a>, and send a complete ticket.</strong></font><br>
     <a href="errata.html#sshafs">A source code patch is available</a>.<br>
     <a href="stable.html"><font color=#00b000>[Applied to stable]</font></a>
 <li>Fix a memory leak in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=mg&sektion=1">mg(1)</a>.
 <li>Assorted hppa memory management fixes.
-<li>Allow fractionnal delays in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=top&sektion=1">top(1)</a>.
+<li>Allow fractional delays in <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=top&sektion=1">top(1)</a>.
 <li>Enable upgrade functionality again on alpha installation media.
 <li>Extensive cleaning of the installation scripts, adding functionality yet reducing size.
 <li>Make <a href="http://www.openbsd.org/cgi-bin/man.cgi?query=cvs&sektion=1">cvs(1)</a> create the .cvspass file on a login operation if it does not exist, rather than failing.
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
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