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+++ www/sgi.html	2010/03/09 18:56:27	1.64
@@ -67,20 +67,18 @@
 The OpenBSD/sgi port has its roots in the <a href="arc.html">OpenBSD/arc</a>
 port created early in the OpenBSD history. Arc support was rather soon
 discontinued due to the lack of interest and availability of decent hardware.
-The OpenBSD Mips support has since then been supported outside the OpenBSD
-project.
 <br>
-As SGI hardware has become affordable and easy to come by, interest
-for an SGI port in the tree has increased.
+Eventually SGI hardware became more affordable and obtainable, and interest
+for an SGI port in the tree increased.
 The final piece, a working 64 bit toolchain, eventually became available and
 allowed the 64 bit SGI OpenBSD port to appear in 2004.
 <br>
-Hardware support was initially limited to the O2 workstations. Efforts
+Hardware support was initially limited to the O2 workstations.  Efforts
 to port to more systems did not really start until 2008, where the first
 Octane support parts were introduced. This work was completed in 2009
 with support for Origin family systems as well, allowing OpenBSD to be
-the first free operating system to run on the Fuel workstations, and later
-on Origin 350 servers.
+the first free operating system to run on the Fuel workstations, and even
+later, also on Origin 350 servers.
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 <small><a href="mailto:www@openbsd.org">www@openbsd.org</a></small>
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-<small>$OpenBSD: sgi.html,v 1.63 2010/03/09 18:30:24 miod Exp $</small>
+<small>$OpenBSD: sgi.html,v 1.64 2010/03/09 18:56:27 deraadt Exp $</small>
 
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