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 <h1>OpenBSD: Users' Views</h1> 
 <p>Many users have commented on their use of OpenBSD.
 The following are all extracts from our public mailing lists or,
-in rare cases, other mailing lists (these have links to the original articles).
-They've been shortened, and edited slighly for spelling and grammar,
+occasionally, other mailing lists (these have links to the original articles).
+Postings have been shortened, and edited slighly for spelling and grammar,
 but are otherwise unchanged.
 
 <h2>Matthew Haas says this:</h2>
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 It was a P133 with 64MB ram.  And it didn't go down.  It got a bit slower,
 but never crashed :-)
 
-<h2>John J. Adelsberger III said this about us Bruce
-Schneier's 
+<h2>John J. Adelsberger III said this about us in Bruce Schneier's 
 <a href="http://www.counterpane.com/crypto-gram-0004.html#CommentsfromReaders">
 Crypto-Gram</a>:</h2>
 (the comments he is responding to are Schneier's)
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 <a href="index.html"><img height=24 width=24 src=back.gif border=0 alt=OpenBSD></a> 
 <a href=mailto:www@openbsd.org>www@openbsd.org</a>
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